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dying beauty2

lesliemarie-manips

Published: Jul 8, 2010

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_{Ironic dreams on dead memories,
Ah, how bittersweet irony sings its praise,
and bird chirping loving memories
with old withered faces ending warm summer days.

**
I loved my idea for my old version of 'Dying Beauty'.
I loved it so much I decided to redo it. I don't know if I like this one better or not. I think I might.
The hair on the right back of the mane is supposed to be like that. I was aiming for static. Yes, the fading of the horse is intentional, it wasn't an eraser malfunction.
I looked over everything over and over. I actually finished it two days ago, but I left it because it looks like something is missing.
But hmm. I can't think of anything.

What do you think of this one ? The text is intentionally big because it's supposed to have the feel of being on the wall.

EDIT: I tried to fix the hooves, and extended the canvas. What do you think, now ?

-Inspiration-
My old piece: [link]

-Stock-

© lesliemarie-manips. 2010}